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"Many that live deserve death, and some that die deserve life. I'm here to enforce those beliefs."

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The Journey - Part 4

Posted by ReconRebel Jan. 2, 2008 @ 10:28 PM EST

Leagues away from Midhome the rain continued to fall at a steady pace, filling the gutters in the city of Stonekeep to overflow. Huddled near the doorway to the Minitaur Inn a lone figure marveled at the spectacle nature had created. At first glance one might wonder why this person hadn't gone inside to leave the harsh weather for the comfort of the hearth, but it quickly became apparent the downpour was causing her little discomfort. "I love the rain" she thought. "At least they still have rain here... wherever here is." Back in her world she was born in the spring one rainy day and it had always held some fascination for her since she was a child. The first signs of raindrops would inevitably draw her outside and the puddles that formed would become giant oceans, trecherous waters that were home to all manner of sea monsters. It was by far her favorite type of weather and she was at her best in it. The woman stood roughly five and a half feet tall, dressed in the forest colors of olive green and chestnut brown. A beautiful bow made of yew was held fast at her side with a quiver full of finely crafted arrows strapped over her hooded tunic. Slender of build and somewhat animated she stared out into the street transfixed by the ever increasing downpour. "Time to go for a walk" she thought. "Of course it's time... it's raining isn't it?"

Back inside the Minotaur Inn the atmosphere wasn't quite so cheerful. Soft candlelight danced across gloomy faces as the Inn's patrons continued to guzzle all manner of spirits, allowing them to momentarily forget about the foul weather happening outside. A huge stone fireplace set in the center of the room blazed away, casting it's own glow and easily heating the tavern to a comfortable temperature. The less fortunate travelers would huddle near the fire for warmth, steam rising from their rain soaked clothes, causing the atmosphere inside to become heavy and damp. An old man sat in a corner of the room facing the door, warily watching all who entered and exited the place as he nervously sipped his ale. He was an accomplished wizard and he knew something was amiss. He could sense it. The warrior sitting beside him laughed at his friend's uneasy mood and tried his best to cheer him up. "Another round over here" he shouted above the noise, apparently unconcerned about drawing attention to their table. "My companions will meet us here over the next few days my friend. Once we are together we can take care of your little... problem." Without a word, the wizard looked over at the smiling man and let out a deep sigh, finally giving in to his cheerful mood. "One more round ranger," he said in a serious tone, "then we head back to the safety of our rooms." Nodding at his friend the two raised their mugs in agreement. It only took a second for the wizard to miss the dark cloaked figure that had entered the tavern, and by the time his eyes were back on the doorway, the stranger was somewhere inside.

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Jan. 3, 2008 | 5:44 AM cadreamer says:

Awesome Photo to go with this part of the story!! Seriously, you could easily make a novel out of these stories. There is so much left out there to know, it would be quite the intricate tale. More please!!:)

Jan. 26, 2008 | 1:25 AM ReconRebel responds:

Thank you cadreamer, that means a lot to me. I've already finished the 5th installment, just need to spruce up the paragraphs. I'll PM you again if I can't find an appropriate pic. :)


Jan. 23, 2008 | 9:02 PM PinballWizard976 says:

Very nice story and picture!

Jan. 26, 2008 | 1:29 AM ReconRebel responds:

Glad you like the story PinballWizard. Finding pics to go with the narrative isn't as easy as it seems.


Mar. 12, 2008 | 11:50 PM TarThoron says:

So tell me, what's you're favorite type of cider?

Mar. 13, 2008 | 8:06 PM ReconRebel responds:

How you doin' Tar? When I was still drinking the stuff my favorite cider was easily raspberry. Cider got a little too sweet for my taste so I switched to Clamato & beer. Up here that's known as a Red Eye. It may sound gross but the two really go well together. Still waiting for any sign of life from Retrogade. :P


Mar. 19, 2008 | 4:16 AM TarThoron says:

Clamato? *googles* Clam and tomato juice? Eww. About the only way I truly dislike tomatoes is in juice form, and I dislike all seafood with the exception of fresh caught walleye, so that in no way sounds good to me.

Apr. 11, 2008 | 12:28 AM ReconRebel responds:

Dislike all seafood?!? I'm shocked Tar. Calamari with tzatziki sauce is to die for but it has to be cooked right. There's a few restaurants in Vancouver that never miss. Cod? Crab? Lobster? You need to live on the coast if you're a seafood freak. ^_~


Apr. 10, 2008 | 1:36 PM archex says:

Cool stroy and the pic is nice too.
I'd be scared shitless if that was coming at me in a dark alleyway

Apr. 11, 2008 | 12:33 AM ReconRebel responds:

Thanks for the compliment archex. Maybe I should get around to posting Part 5 'eh? "From ghoulies and ghosties and long-legged beasties and things that go bump in the night. Good Lord deliver us!"

-old Scottish invocation-


Apr. 19, 2008 | 10:53 PM NEVR says:

You have a great style of narrative which I really admire. I love literature, but I always find it hard to write fiction, as my ideas don't often come to fruition on paper.

Have you read any of Mervyn Peak's work? I'm sure you'd find it interesting - especially his 'Titus' series, of which I'm currently reading the second book in the trilogy. He uses a wonderfully elaborate gothic fantasy style of narrative, that really captures the characters and setting, and your work somewhat reminds me of it.

I look forward to reading the next part!

PS. Congrats on level 44 :)

Apr. 20, 2008 | 2:05 AM ReconRebel responds:

Much appreciated NEVR. I do my best to be descriptive. Part 5 is almost finished but I still need to come up with a good cliffhanger. Never read any of Peake's work but the ancient castle of Gormenghast sounds cool! Ever read 'Man on Fire' by A.J. Quinnell? It's a little slow to start but once it gets moving you won't put the book down.

Need a sword bud? I've got an extra one to spare. ;-)


Mar. 21, 2009 | 10:17 PM FlockMasta says:

i am the real tom fulp

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